Script Consulting for Independent Film

Who I Work With

Producers with scripts that need to be tightened before funding or shooting.

Writers who know something isn’t working—but can’t pinpoint it.

Independent filmmakers preparing for production.

First-time writers who want professional-level structure and clarity.

Most Scripts Don’t Fail Because of the Idea

They fail because the execution breaks down for the following reasons:

The script isn’t realistic to produce within budget.

Scenes drag or don’t move the plot forward.

Characters feel flat or inconsistent.

Dialogue doesn’t land.

The story loses direction.

That’s where I come in.

What I Fix

Alignment between script and real-world production constraints.

Story structure and pacing.

Character depth and consistency.

Dialogue clarity and impact.

Scene purpose and progression.

Narrative cohesion from beginning to end.

Story + Production Awareness

Most consultants focus only on story. I focus on whether your story can actually be made 

within the budget you have.

This is what turns scripts into films—not just ideas.

I identify elements that will break your budget and give you budget friendly alternatives.

I help reshape scenes to be both powerful and producible.

I bridge the gap between creative vision and execution.

What You’ll Receive

Detailed, actionable script notes.

Clear identification of what’s working vs. what’s not.

Specific recommendations for improvement.

Character and story enhancement strategies.

Optional follow-up consultation to go deeper.

How It Works

Submit your script and project details.

I review and analyze your material.

You receive structured, actionable feedback.

We can schedule a follow-up consultation (optional).

I approach every project with precision and honesty.